Sunday, September 8, 2013

110. Friends Always Listen


Tether a crystal glass to my
hand
Fill it with a dry martini
You earn your crown of true
friend
As I spill my soul in your
downtown
loft
City lights sparkling outside.


MOV
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trifecta writing challenge/ the required words are in bold

12 comments:

  1. Nice story and use of the prompt words. I can picture this scene very well.

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    1. thanks, lumdog! this prompt was hard for me (I did not feel like the 3 words went together, so I struggled), so I am REALLY glad that what I came up with was deemed ok! :)

      best,
      MOV

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  2. Love the way you used tether here! And what a great closing line. Well done!

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  3. Ha .. that's a great use of the words. and what a nice atmosphere... I can here seduction and smooth jazz music coming up

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  4. The image you have created blends the 3 prompt words so perfectly.

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  5. Lovely. I believe that I have been on both sides of that interaction!

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  6. Wonderful piece of writing-I agree with your title and the piece just flowed:-)

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  7. This has an excellent flow, especially with a glass tethered to the hand. really well done.

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  8. Well that does happen. Especially with a beverage of that type tethered to a hand. Words and emotions flow. Love this.

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  9. A good judge of a friend's strength is how willing s/he is to listen to your troubles.

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  10. Great job, MOV! I love the drink tethered. Thanks for linking up. Remember to come back and vote.

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  11. OMG I love the opening line! Wonder who I can say that to of a Friday evening?

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